holalala...
im back!!!:)
yea...the day seem good and great...:)
the routine for almost 2weeks was nothing much different... .....
erm what else an undergraduate student should do besides lectures+assignment+presentations+discussionhuhuhu...:)
nway really enjoyed the process so much even sometimes it really triggered the ability of this ordinary girl...:)
besides there's a time where this little body was really overloaded with so many stuff which is due to stress and pressure...
yet ethg still seem good and great...ehehehhe...:P
nothing change so much eventhough at the new place...
and of course my routine is just been the same for every weekend....
yea...home sweet home!!!:P
btw obviously the little girl always miss her boy so much...
and the distance really made this two souls become more attached...
the excitement to meet each other is really wonderful...*wink*
btw today a chocolate's story really made the little girl being so speechless and of course extremely happy....:))
yea...a chocolate did give the little girl a new hope even a bless...ehehehe...:P
thank you so much to the chocolate.....:)
and of course thank and thank so much to the person who created the 'chocolate's story'..
it such a fantastic and memoriable story eva...
loveyousomuch
alwaysmissyou
~XOXOXO~
Wednesday, July 29, 2009
*_* a chOcOLAtE gAvE a nEw hOpE *_*
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2 tadadada:P:
yea...the day seem good and great...:)
[u might want to consider changing the structure of this sentence.great is enough, why put good? the day seem good and great is so wrong honey]
the routine for almost 2weeks was nothing much different... .....
erm what else an undergraduate student should do besides lectures+assignment+presentations+discussionhuhuhu...:)
[please consider restructuring the sentence]
nway really enjoyed the process so much even sometimes it really triggered the ability of this ordinary girl...:)
[it is wise to use simple sentences than trying to sound good and end up with silly grammatical errors. recorrect the whole sentence so that readers can understand the message that you want to convey]
besides there's a time where this little body was really overloaded with so many stuff which is due to stress and pressure...
[it's supposed to be : there are times when this little body would feel so worn out due to the amount of stress and pressure]
yet ethg still seem good and great...ehehehhe...:P
[again, people don't put 'good' and 'great' in the same sentence dear]
nothing change so much eventhough at the new place...
[nothing much has changed despite the fact that i'm now in a new place]
I'm sorry for having to do this, but I have been reading your blog for the past few months and i feel that somebody has to voice out his or her concern. So yes, that somebody is me. I believe that you are pursuing your studies in English literature (do correct me if I'm wrong) and are going to become an English teacher once you graduate. It scares me to see how poor your English is, and no I'm not here to condemn. If not for this fact, I wouldn't care less. The thing is, I care for our younger generation..and if this is the level of English among future English teachers, the worst is yet to come. I beg you, please please consider a private tutor to polish up your English for the sake of our future kids.Thanks.
may i know who's this??
at least i can appreciate ur concern...
please do let me know..
really need ur cooperation...:)
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